I Don't Wanna Be Fat

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Hey, guys!
We make a new fan-made game - I Don't Wanna Be Fat.

The story is kinda easy:

This is a story about Jake - the fat guy. Everyone hates him, because of his excess weight. Everyone makes jokes about him. Jake tired of this. And he decides: "I DON'T WANNA BE FAT"
Jake bought 4 packs of dietary flakes and then in his house came clown from "WAC DONUTS", stole all Jake's flakes and gave to Jake burgers and ran away.
Now help Jake slim - defeat this clown and kill epic bosses!

Note:
At this moment we made only 3 worlds (1 World = 8 Levels and Boss) and version of the game is 1.0.0
We definitely will make patches, updates, bug-fixes and other stuff, so stay tuned!

We hope you'll enjoy this, link to the game: https://gamejolt.com/games/idwbf/238252
Thanks!

[RandomFangamer]

Overall the fangame was enjoyable, but it had a few flaws

• To me, the controls felt a little awkward, although this is probably because I'm used to traditional controls
• The collisions with the grass platforms are broken, I would suggest using a invisible rectangular mask in the platforms for collision and/or making them jump through.
• Give the player a collision mask like in the Gamemaker engines to make collisions work better
• When shooting the shooting sound plays twice, it seems to me that two bullets are being created. so that could be why.
• Make the room reset after the player dies so credits, switches, etc. will reset unless the player saves.
• Maybe add some sound effect for collecting the credits - even the Mario coin sound would work

Lastly

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I really enjoyed the cutscene trap